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   Preetilata【ツ】 on July 11, 2013 at 7:12 pm

   Loved it. So full of hope.

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     Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 5:58 am

     Thanks a lot 🙂

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   mysay.in on July 11, 2013 at 7:23 pm

   beautiful !!
   BTW .. its been long since you posted your toons 🙁 or did I miss any post ?

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     Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 5:59 am

     You know so many people have asked me this that I now feel guilty. I will for sure put up a toon soon pakka pakka

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   SuKupedia ™ :) :) on July 11, 2013 at 8:31 pm

   very hopeful lines 🙂

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     Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 6:00 am

     Thank you 🙂

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   Kathy on July 11, 2013 at 9:23 pm

   Despite the tears there is hope of what a new tomorrow holds. Lovely!!

   Kathy
   https://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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     Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 6:01 am

     Thanks Kathy 🙂

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   Roshni on July 11, 2013 at 11:36 pm

   So many possibilities and so many facets in pain! Lovely haiku!!

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     Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 6:03 am

     Thanks Roshni 🙂 that’s why I love haiku (though still learning in it) they exhibit so many emotions…

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   Rainbow Hues on July 12, 2013 at 1:54 am

   That’s excellent. The rainbow after the rain….the smiles after the pain….excellent!

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     Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 6:03 am

     Thanks a lot kajal 🙂

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   hitchwriter on July 12, 2013 at 3:21 am

   Lovely 😀

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     Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 6:04 am

     Thanks 🙂

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   Bhavya on July 12, 2013 at 5:07 am

   Wow Richa 🙂 🙂

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     Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 6:05 am

     Thanks Bhavya 🙂

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   Ruchira on July 12, 2013 at 5:56 am

   Lovely imagery Richa. I love the comparison of the rains with tears and then rainbows as happiness 🙂 One must always look for rainbows even in storms isn’t it !
   If I may suggest – the second line “Sunshine brings forth and astound” looks rather long – like a prose. They say you should be able to read a haiku in one breath – how about making it a bit crisper ?

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     Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 6:06 am

     Now that you mention I too observed it. Will keep it in mind for future 🙂

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    sulekkha on July 12, 2013 at 6:00 am

    Awesome haiku that too in your first attempt.My haiku also had a tear 🙂

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      Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 6:07 am

      This is not my first haiku waise 😀 and yes I read your haiku it was beautiful 🙂

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    Afshan on July 12, 2013 at 10:09 am

    Bravo for the Haiku
    Now I am tempted to try one!

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      Richa Singh on July 12, 2013 at 2:45 pm

      Thanks Afshan :- )

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    Shiva on July 13, 2013 at 10:08 am

    as thet say haiku doesnt tell it shows… it did …keep it up!

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      Richa Singh on July 13, 2013 at 1:57 pm

      thanks Apoorva mam 🙂

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    Suzy on July 13, 2013 at 10:22 am

    Love how you described the creation of the rainbow. Beautiful. Loved your haiku.

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      Richa Singh on July 13, 2013 at 1:57 pm

      thank you soo much Suzy 🙂

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    The Young Bigmouth on July 13, 2013 at 6:33 pm

    Haikus don’t make sense to me generally. But this so simple and deep, nice.

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      Richa Singh on July 16, 2013 at 2:42 pm

      thank you so much 🙂

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    dianasmusings on July 15, 2013 at 11:49 am

    Beautiful !!

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      Richa Singh on July 16, 2013 at 2:43 pm

      thanks Diana 🙂

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    Pheno Menon on July 15, 2013 at 12:03 pm

    Very intense

    PhenoMenon
    https://throodalookingglass.com/swaying-trees/

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      Richa Singh on July 16, 2013 at 2:44 pm

      thanks 🙂

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    Shilpa Garg on July 15, 2013 at 6:48 pm

    Beautiful! 🙂

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      Richa Singh on July 16, 2013 at 2:46 pm

      thanks 🙂 🙂

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    Sankara Jayanth on July 16, 2013 at 5:00 am

    Beautiful play with words(and colors)! Brilliant haiku!
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    My haiku.

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      Richa Singh on July 16, 2013 at 2:47 pm

      thanks Sankara 🙂 will surely see your haiku now 🙂

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