Surrender,
for there is no choice,
my dear friend.
for there is no choice,
my dear friend.
Games she
played didn’t work
wins got lost.
But now we
know what stakes are
left dear friend.
The saga
called life doesnt make
or break you.
Its how you
and I kept promises
all untied.
This haiku is on prompt “Betrayal” through Haiku Heights.
The theme I have chosen is betrayal of life.
Lovely set of haiku x I’m glad I found your blog!
thanks a lot 🙂 🙂
This is wonderful I especially love the last one =)
thanks a lot 🙂
“haikus” something i love and something i never could write…:(…as envious as i m..:P…i loved it..:)
thanks a lot… even i find them difficult but once u get the hang u wud love them 🙂
Good one…!!!
thanks Anjan 🙂
Thank you for visiting me so I could find you. I agree with mindlovemisery about the third. Wonderful expression of betrayal. Also love the title. Made my head spin with recall.
thanks a lot maggie 🙂
Nicely done:) It’s how you deal with the drama. Life is like an echo, what you send out comes back.
exactly 🙂 and thank you 🙂
Nice composition Richa!:)
thanks tarang 🙂
“Untied promise” is such a nice way to sum up life…Loved it:)
Thanks reshma 🙂
Wow Richa loved your haiku, thats real nice, and I too loved the imagery of keeping untied promises.
Good take 🙂
Thanks a lot kislaya its you who introduced me to the haiku heights 🙂 thank you because its damn addictive! 😀
Its a pleasure and it really is damn addictive, I cant agree more 🙂
Nice use of the prompt
Thanks 🙂
I like your post.
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thanks a lot ankit will visit for sure 🙂
I love the stories woven through this haiku !!!
thanks a lot 🙂
Nice composition.
thanks a lot easwar 🙂
Nice. . . 🙂
thanks a lot 🙂
That is a nice take on the prompt!! Liked the last one the fastening undone!!
thanks nanka 🙂